Cool
I dont think its the drums sounding crap, rather the cheezy nice sounding synth that lets this song down. The drums have a cool downsampled kinda photek/jazzy sound that you don't really see in commercial D+B. SO more melody (have a set bassline main tune with chords, counterpoint or whatever filler you choose) + play about with your beat more not only musically but digitally. Good start.